Confusion in a hamster’s eyes

[Little Hammy Moon]

Prologue

Kai smiled as she picked up Justin. Her finger gave little pets to the hamster’s soft fur. The hybrid looked at Kai with a curious look on her face. Suddenly, everything went black. Kai only heard mutters and whispers of the word «hamster». She woke up with a thumping pain in her head. She realized that her body was on the floor and went to stand up. Her eyes looked around the room. It was big, with marine blue walls, a black floor and blinding lights that look like the ones in schools that remind you of horror movies. Many people were there, Kai guessed that it was a little over 140. Her heart started to pound hard as she realized that she recognized no one. Not even one person was familiar to her. While panicking, she saw a light grey door in the corner with a lock on it.

[Paws to the Sky]

Nice one.………. I think this is a great start to a story.……… I would love to read more.………….





I’m also a little disappointed to see only four reactions to this chapter and that there were no Comments of encouragement at all before I put my comment on - it takes a lot of effort to write a story and people that bother to do it like Little Hammy Moon should be offered some encouragement to carry on because if they are not then chances are they simply will not bother continuing to write their stories........



Nuff said…………

[Little Hammy Moon]

Nice one.………. I think this is a great start to a story.……… I would love to read more.………….





I’m also a little disappointed to see only four reactions to this chapter and that there were no Comments of encouragement at all before I put my comment on - it takes a lot of effort to write a story and people that bother to do it like Little Hammy Moon should be offered some encouragement to carry on because if they are not then chances are they simply will not bother continuing to write their stories........



Nuff said…………

Thank you so much, Ralph. It means a lot (:

[Pinenut]

I am sorry for not commenting. I loved the story but thought I would ruin the flow by commenting.

[Pinenut]

I was hoping for the next exciting instalment today. I will try and be patient.

[Little Hammy Moon]

I was hoping for the next exciting instalment today. I will try and be patient.

AHHHHH I FORGOT ABOUT THIS STORY :facepalm:
I needed to ask this but forgot (this kinda spoils the story soooo)

Spoiler

I kinda need to talk with other members of the forum to write my story. I’ll explain why if you accept, but it comes with spoilers. PM me if your interested, and thank you

[hamsterlover246]

It's great!
I love how it's written